IELTS Task 1: Unemployment Rates
IELTS 1-topshiriq: ishsizlik darajasi
The graph below shows the unemployment rates in three countries between 2008 and 2020.
- Spain
- USA
- Japan
Ma’lumotlar mashq uchun tuzilgan.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
IELTS Academic Task 1: 20 daqiqada grafik, diagramma yoki jadvalni tasvirlaysiz. Fikr bildirmaysiz — ma’lumotni tanlab, taqqoslab berasiz. Overview (umumiy manzara) majburiy: usiz Task Achievement 5 banddan oshmaydi.
- introduce what the graph shows — grafik nimani ko‘rsatishini ayting
- give a clear overview — umumiy manzarani bering
- report key figures and make comparisons — raqamlarni keltiring va taqqoslang
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Birinchi 3 daqiqani grafikni o‘rganishga sarflang: eng katta, eng kichik va eng katta o‘zgarish.
- Overview’ni hech qachon tashlab ketmang.
- Ma’lumotni guruhlang — har bir raqamni ketma-ket sanamang.
- 150 so‘zdan kam yozmang; 160–190 so‘z ideal.
Namuna javob
Uch mamlakat mantiqiy tartibda, cho‘qqi va past nuqtalar aniq; “on a smaller scale” kabi taqqoslov iboralari Band 8 darajasida.
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The line graph compares the percentage of the workforce that was unemployed in Spain, the USA and Japan over a twelve-year period starting in 2008.
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Overall, Spain had by far the highest unemployment rate throughout the period, while Japan consistently had the lowest. All three countries saw rates rise after 2008, and two of them experienced another increase in 2020.
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In 2008, unemployment stood at 11% in Spain, compared with 6% in the USA and 4% in Japan. Spain’s rate then rose dramatically, more than doubling to a peak of 25% in 2012, before gradually falling to 15% in 2018 and rising slightly to 16% in 2020.
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The USA followed a similar pattern on a smaller scale: its rate climbed to 9.6% in 2010, fell steadily to a low of 4% in 2018, and then doubled to 8% in 2020. Japan’s figures, by contrast, remained relatively stable, never exceeding 5% and dropping to just 2.4% in 2018.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In my opinion, this is a good trend.
(Task 1 da shaxsiy fikr yozilmaydi.)
Task 1 — faqat ma’lumot tavsifi.
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It increased to 40 percents.
It increased to 40%. / … to 40 per cent.
“percent” ko‘plikda ishlatilmaydi.
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The number of people increased from 10 to 20, then it increased to 30, then it increased …
The number of people rose steadily from 10 to 30.
Raqamlarni sanash emas, tendensiyani ko‘rsating.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish — 1 gap
Savolni o‘z so‘zlaringiz bilan qayta yozing (shows → compares / illustrates).
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2Overview — 2 gap
Raqamsiz! Eng katta o‘zgarish, eng yuqori/past ko‘rsatkich.
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31-tafsilot abzasi
Bir guruh ma’lumot: raqamlar bilan.
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42-tafsilot abzasi
Ikkinchi guruh va taqqoslash.
Foydali iboralar
Overview
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Overall, it is clear that … Umuman olganda, … aniq ko‘rinadi
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The most striking feature is … Eng ko‘zga tashlanadigan jihat — …
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by far the largest / most … boshqalardan ancha katta / ko‘p
O‘zgarish
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rose sharply / increased steadily keskin o‘sdi / bir maromda oshdi
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fell / declined gradually asta-sekin kamaydi
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remained stable at … … da barqaror qoldi
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reached a peak of … … bilan eng yuqori nuqtaga chiqdi
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fluctuated between … and … … va … orasida o‘zgarib turdi
Ulush va taqqoslash
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accounted for … …ni tashkil qildi
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just over / just under a quarter chorakdan sal ko‘p / sal kam
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By contrast, … Aksincha …
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twice as many … as … …dan ikki baravar ko‘p
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
The graph below shows the unemployment rates in three countries between 2008 and 2020.
- Spain
- USA
- Japan
Ma’lumotlar mashq uchun tuzilgan.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
- grafik nimani ko‘rsatishini ayting
- umumiy manzarani bering
- raqamlarni keltiring va taqqoslang
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
IELTS Writing mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
IELTS’da har bir mezonga 0–9 band beriladi, yozma ish bahosi — to‘rt mezonning o‘rtachasi (0,5 ga yaxlitlanadi). Bu yerda B2–C1 uchun eng muhim 5–8 bandlar ko‘rsatilgan.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish Taxminan Band 7.5–8
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
The line graph compares the percentage of the workforce that was unemployed in Spain, the USA and Japan over a twelve-year period starting in 2008.
Overall, Spain had by far the highest unemployment rate throughout the period, while Japan consistently had the lowest. All three countries saw rates rise after 2008, and two of them experienced another increase in 2020.
In 2008, unemployment stood at 11% in Spain, compared with 6% in the USA and 4% in Japan. Spain’s rate then rose dramatically, more than doubling to a peak of 25% in 2012, before gradually falling to 15% in 2018 and rising slightly to 16% in 2020.
The USA followed a similar pattern on a smaller scale: its rate climbed to 9.6% in 2010, fell steadily to a low of 4% in 2018, and then doubled to 8% in 2020. Japan’s figures, by contrast, remained relatively stable, never exceeding 5% and dropping to just 2.4% in 2018.