Proposal: Using a Community Centre
Taklif: jamoat markazidan foydalanish
Your town has a new community centre, and the local council has asked residents to suggest how it should be used.
Write a proposal suggesting activities for different age groups, explaining why these activities would be popular, and recommending how the centre could be funded.
Write your proposal in 220–260 words.
C1 Advanced proposal: rahbariyat yoki tashkilotga rasmiy taklif yozasiz. Sarlavhalar bilan bo‘lingan, aniq tavsiyalar va asoslar bilan, rasmiy ohangda.
- suggest activities for different age groups — turli yoshdagilar uchun faoliyatlar taklif qiling
- explain why they would be popular — nega mashhur bo‘lishini tushuntiring
- recommend how it could be funded — moliyalash usulini tavsiya qiling
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Proposal sarlavhalar bilan bo‘linadi: Introduction, Current situation, Recommendations, Conclusion.
- Majhul nisbat va rasmiy iboralar ishlating: “It is recommended that …”.
- Har bir tavsiyani foyda bilan asoslang.
Namuna javob
Barcha bandlar sarlavhalar bilan yoritilgan, takliflar dalil bilan asoslangan, rasmiy ohang to‘g‘ri. Namuna hajmi: 233 so‘z.
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Proposal for the New Community Centre
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Introduction
The purpose of this proposal is to suggest activities that would make the new community centre valuable for residents of all ages, and to recommend how it could be funded sustainably. -
Suggested activities
For children, after-school clubs offering art, chess and homework support would give parents a safe and affordable childcare option. Teenagers would benefit from a music studio and coding workshops, as there are currently few places where young people can meet and develop creative skills. For older residents, morning exercise classes and computer courses would help them stay active and connected with their families. Evening language classes and a weekly film club could also appeal to working adults who have little time during the day. -
Why these activities would succeed
A recent survey by the residents’ association showed strong demand for affordable activities, particularly for teenagers and the elderly. Offering something for every generation would also encourage different age groups to mix. Intergenerational events, such as teenagers teaching older residents to use smartphones, could strengthen the sense of community in our town. -
Funding
It is recommended that the centre charge small fees for regular courses, with discounts for low-income families. Additional funding could be obtained through sponsorship from local businesses and grants from cultural foundations. -
Conclusion
With a varied programme and a balanced funding model, the centre could become the heart of our community.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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I think you should maybe do something about the canteen.
It is recommended that the canteen menu be revised.
Proposal rasmiy va aniq bo‘lishi kerak.
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There is a lot of problems.
There are a number of problems.
Ko‘plikdagi ot bilan “are”.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Maqsad (Introduction)
Taklif nima uchun yozilganini ayting.
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2Hozirgi holat
Muammo yoki ehtiyojni qisqa tasvirlang.
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3Tavsiyalar
2–3 aniq taklif va ularning foydasi.
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4Xulosa
Kutilgan natija va yakuniy tavsiya.
Foydali iboralar
Rasmiy taklif
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The aim of this proposal is to … Ushbu taklifning maqsadi — …
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It is recommended that … … tavsiya etiladi
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One option would be to … Variantlardan biri — …
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This would enable … Bu …ga imkon beradi
Asoslash
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According to a recent survey, … Yaqindagi so‘rovnomaga ko‘ra …
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This would be particularly beneficial for … Bu ayniqsa … uchun foydali bo‘ladi
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If these measures are implemented, … Agar bu choralar amalga oshirilsa …
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
Your town has a new community centre, and the local council has asked residents to suggest how it should be used.
Write a proposal suggesting activities for different age groups, explaining why these activities would be popular, and recommending how the centre could be funded.
Write your proposal in 220–260 words.
- turli yoshdagilar uchun faoliyatlar taklif qiling
- nega mashhur bo‘lishini tushuntiring
- moliyalash usulini tavsiya qiling
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish C1 Advanced · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Proposal for the New Community Centre
Introduction
The purpose of this proposal is to suggest activities that would make the new community centre valuable for residents of all ages, and to recommend how it could be funded sustainably.
Suggested activities
For children, after-school clubs offering art, chess and homework support would give parents a safe and affordable childcare option. Teenagers would benefit from a music studio and coding workshops, as there are currently few places where young people can meet and develop creative skills. For older residents, morning exercise classes and computer courses would help them stay active and connected with their families. Evening language classes and a weekly film club could also appeal to working adults who have little time during the day.
Why these activities would succeed
A recent survey by the residents’ association showed strong demand for affordable activities, particularly for teenagers and the elderly. Offering something for every generation would also encourage different age groups to mix. Intergenerational events, such as teenagers teaching older residents to use smartphones, could strengthen the sense of community in our town.
Funding
It is recommended that the centre charge small fees for regular courses, with discounts for low-income families. Additional funding could be obtained through sponsorship from local businesses and grants from cultural foundations.
Conclusion
With a varied programme and a balanced funding model, the centre could become the heart of our community.