Proposal: A Greener Campus
Taklif: yashil kampus
Your university wants to become more environmentally friendly and has invited students to submit proposals.
Write a proposal outlining the main environmental problems on campus, suggesting how they could be addressed, and explaining how students could be encouraged to take part.
Write your proposal in 220–260 words.
C1 Advanced proposal: rahbariyat yoki tashkilotga rasmiy taklif yozasiz. Sarlavhalar bilan bo‘lingan, aniq tavsiyalar va asoslar bilan, rasmiy ohangda.
- outline the environmental problems — ekologik muammolarni ko‘rsating
- suggest how they could be addressed — qanday hal qilish mumkinligini taklif qiling
- explain how to involve students — talabalarni qanday jalb qilishni tushuntiring
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Proposal sarlavhalar bilan bo‘linadi: Introduction, Current situation, Recommendations, Conclusion.
- Majhul nisbat va rasmiy iboralar ishlating: “It is recommended that …”.
- Har bir tavsiyani foyda bilan asoslang.
Namuna javob
Proposal tuzilishi aniq, tavsiyalar amaliy va asoslangan, rasmiy ohang izchil. Namuna hajmi: 242 so‘z.
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Proposal: Towards a Greener Campus
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Introduction
This proposal outlines the main environmental problems on our campus and suggests realistic ways of addressing them with the active participation of students. -
Main problems
The most visible problem is waste. Large quantities of single-use plastic cups and food containers are thrown away in the canteen every day, and recycling bins are rare and poorly labelled. Energy is also wasted, as lights and air conditioning are frequently left on in empty classrooms. Finally, the campus has very little green space, and most of the outdoor areas are covered in concrete. -
Recommendations
It is recommended that the canteen replace disposable items with reusable cups and plates, offering a small discount to students who bring their own containers. Clearly labelled recycling stations should be installed in every building. In addition, motion sensors could be fitted to lights in classrooms and corridors, which would reduce electricity consumption considerably. Unused areas of concrete could also be turned into small gardens, which would provide shade and attractive places for students to relax. -
Involving students
A student-led “Green Team” could organise awareness campaigns and monitor progress, while competitions between faculties to reduce waste would make the initiative engaging. Volunteers could also help to plant and maintain the new gardens, giving students a sense of ownership over the project. -
Conclusion
By combining practical changes with student involvement, the university could significantly reduce its environmental impact while setting an example for the wider community.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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I think you should maybe do something about the canteen.
It is recommended that the canteen menu be revised.
Proposal rasmiy va aniq bo‘lishi kerak.
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There is a lot of problems.
There are a number of problems.
Ko‘plikdagi ot bilan “are”.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Maqsad (Introduction)
Taklif nima uchun yozilganini ayting.
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2Hozirgi holat
Muammo yoki ehtiyojni qisqa tasvirlang.
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3Tavsiyalar
2–3 aniq taklif va ularning foydasi.
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4Xulosa
Kutilgan natija va yakuniy tavsiya.
Foydali iboralar
Rasmiy taklif
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The aim of this proposal is to … Ushbu taklifning maqsadi — …
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It is recommended that … … tavsiya etiladi
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One option would be to … Variantlardan biri — …
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This would enable … Bu …ga imkon beradi
Asoslash
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According to a recent survey, … Yaqindagi so‘rovnomaga ko‘ra …
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This would be particularly beneficial for … Bu ayniqsa … uchun foydali bo‘ladi
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If these measures are implemented, … Agar bu choralar amalga oshirilsa …
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
Your university wants to become more environmentally friendly and has invited students to submit proposals.
Write a proposal outlining the main environmental problems on campus, suggesting how they could be addressed, and explaining how students could be encouraged to take part.
Write your proposal in 220–260 words.
- ekologik muammolarni ko‘rsating
- qanday hal qilish mumkinligini taklif qiling
- talabalarni qanday jalb qilishni tushuntiring
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish C1 Advanced · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Proposal: Towards a Greener Campus
Introduction
This proposal outlines the main environmental problems on our campus and suggests realistic ways of addressing them with the active participation of students.
Main problems
The most visible problem is waste. Large quantities of single-use plastic cups and food containers are thrown away in the canteen every day, and recycling bins are rare and poorly labelled. Energy is also wasted, as lights and air conditioning are frequently left on in empty classrooms. Finally, the campus has very little green space, and most of the outdoor areas are covered in concrete.
Recommendations
It is recommended that the canteen replace disposable items with reusable cups and plates, offering a small discount to students who bring their own containers. Clearly labelled recycling stations should be installed in every building. In addition, motion sensors could be fitted to lights in classrooms and corridors, which would reduce electricity consumption considerably. Unused areas of concrete could also be turned into small gardens, which would provide shade and attractive places for students to relax.
Involving students
A student-led “Green Team” could organise awareness campaigns and monitor progress, while competitions between faculties to reduce waste would make the initiative engaging. Volunteers could also help to plant and maintain the new gardens, giving students a sense of ownership over the project.
Conclusion
By combining practical changes with student involvement, the university could significantly reduce its environmental impact while setting an example for the wider community.