Essay: Is It Good to Be Famous?
Esse: mashhur bo‘lish yaxshimi?
In your English class you have been talking about celebrities. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Is being famous more of a blessing or a curse?”
Notes — write about: 1. money; 2. privacy; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
B2 First 1-qism essesi: o‘qituvchingiz bergan savolga javob yozasiz. Ikkita qayd beriladi, uchinchisini o‘zingiz qo‘shasiz. Har bir fikr sabab bilan asoslanadi va oxirida aniq xulosa bo‘ladi.
- write about money — pul haqida yozing
- write about privacy — shaxsiy hayot haqida yozing
- add your own idea — o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Ikkala qaydga ham, o‘z qaydingizga ham alohida abzas ajrating.
- Esse — rasmiy matn: qisqartmalar va “very very” kabi iboralardan qoching.
- 190 so‘zdan oshmang — B2 First’da uzunlik chegarasi bor.
Namuna javob
Ikki tomon muvozanatli, pozitsiya xulosada aniq, lug‘at boy (enormous, constant pressure, role models). Namuna hajmi: 149 so‘z.
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Many young people dream of becoming famous, imagining a life of luxury and admiration. However, fame brings serious problems as well as rewards.
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There is no doubt that famous people can earn enormous amounts of money. They can afford beautiful homes and travel the world, and they never have to worry about paying their bills.
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On the other hand, celebrities often lose their privacy completely. Photographers follow them everywhere, and even small mistakes appear in newspapers and on social media. Many stars say they cannot go shopping or walk in a park without being recognised.
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Moreover, famous people are under constant pressure to be perfect role models. Millions of fans copy their behaviour, so every word they say is judged and criticised.
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In conclusion, although fame offers wealth and opportunities, I believe the loss of privacy and the constant pressure make it more of a curse than a blessing.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish
Mavzuni tanishtiring va qisqa javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-qayd
Birinchi qayd: fikr + sabab + misol.
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32-qayd
Ikkinchi qayd: boshqa tomon yoki qo‘shimcha fikr.
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4O‘z fikringiz (3-qayd)
Uchinchi, o‘zingizning g‘oyangiz.
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5Xulosa
Pozitsiyani aniq takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
In your English class you have been talking about celebrities. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Is being famous more of a blessing or a curse?”
Notes — write about: 1. money; 2. privacy; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
- pul haqida yozing
- shaxsiy hayot haqida yozing
- o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish B2 First · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Many young people dream of becoming famous, imagining a life of luxury and admiration. However, fame brings serious problems as well as rewards.
There is no doubt that famous people can earn enormous amounts of money. They can afford beautiful homes and travel the world, and they never have to worry about paying their bills.
On the other hand, celebrities often lose their privacy completely. Photographers follow them everywhere, and even small mistakes appear in newspapers and on social media. Many stars say they cannot go shopping or walk in a park without being recognised.
Moreover, famous people are under constant pressure to be perfect role models. Millions of fans copy their behaviour, so every word they say is judged and criticised.
In conclusion, although fame offers wealth and opportunities, I believe the loss of privacy and the constant pressure make it more of a curse than a blessing.