Essay: Is Tourism Good for a Country?
Esse: turizm mamlakat uchun foydalimi?
In your English class you have been talking about travel. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Does tourism do more good than harm to a country?”
Notes — write about: 1. jobs; 2. the environment; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
B2 First 1-qism essesi: o‘qituvchingiz bergan savolga javob yozasiz. Ikkita qayd beriladi, uchinchisini o‘zingiz qo‘shasiz. Har bir fikr sabab bilan asoslanadi va oxirida aniq xulosa bo‘ladi.
- write about jobs — ish o‘rinlari haqida yozing
- write about the environment — atrof-muhit haqida yozing
- add your own idea — o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Ikkala qaydga ham, o‘z qaydingizga ham alohida abzas ajrating.
- Esse — rasmiy matn: qisqartmalar va “very very” kabi iboralardan qoching.
- 190 so‘zdan oshmang — B2 First’da uzunlik chegarasi bor.
Namuna javob
Uchala qayd aniq, pozitsiya shartli va asoslangan, abzaslar mantiqiy. Namuna hajmi: 152 so‘z.
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Every year, millions of people travel abroad, and for many countries tourism has become a major industry. While it brings clear benefits, I believe its effects must be managed carefully.
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The most obvious benefit of tourism is employment. Hotels, restaurants and tour companies create thousands of jobs, and local people can earn money by selling crafts or food. This is especially important in poorer regions.
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On the other hand, tourism can seriously damage the environment. Large numbers of visitors produce rubbish and pollution, and popular beaches and historical sites can be worn down by the crowds.
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In addition, tourism helps different cultures understand each other. When visitors experience local traditions, they often develop respect for the country, and local people also benefit from meeting people from around the world.
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In conclusion, I think tourism does more good than harm, as long as governments protect the environment and the local way of life.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish
Mavzuni tanishtiring va qisqa javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-qayd
Birinchi qayd: fikr + sabab + misol.
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32-qayd
Ikkinchi qayd: boshqa tomon yoki qo‘shimcha fikr.
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4O‘z fikringiz (3-qayd)
Uchinchi, o‘zingizning g‘oyangiz.
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5Xulosa
Pozitsiyani aniq takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
In your English class you have been talking about travel. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Does tourism do more good than harm to a country?”
Notes — write about: 1. jobs; 2. the environment; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
- ish o‘rinlari haqida yozing
- atrof-muhit haqida yozing
- o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish B2 First · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Every year, millions of people travel abroad, and for many countries tourism has become a major industry. While it brings clear benefits, I believe its effects must be managed carefully.
The most obvious benefit of tourism is employment. Hotels, restaurants and tour companies create thousands of jobs, and local people can earn money by selling crafts or food. This is especially important in poorer regions.
On the other hand, tourism can seriously damage the environment. Large numbers of visitors produce rubbish and pollution, and popular beaches and historical sites can be worn down by the crowds.
In addition, tourism helps different cultures understand each other. When visitors experience local traditions, they often develop respect for the country, and local people also benefit from meeting people from around the world.
In conclusion, I think tourism does more good than harm, as long as governments protect the environment and the local way of life.