Improving a Local Park
Bog‘ni yaxshilash
The park near your home is in poor condition.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe the park and how people use it; explain what problems there are; suggest what the council should do.
- describe the park and how people use it
- explain the problems
- suggest what the council should do
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …,
IELTS General Training Task 1: vaziyat bo‘yicha xat yozasiz (rasmiy, yarim rasmiy yoki norasmiy). Uchta bandning hammasi yoritilishi va ohang to‘g‘ri tanlanishi shart.
- describe the park and how people use it — bog‘ va undan qanday foydalanishni tasvirlang
- explain the problems — muammolarni tushuntiring
- suggest what the council should do — hokimiyat nima qilishi kerakligini taklif qiling
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Ohangni aniqlang: notanish odamga — “Dear Sir or Madam” + “Yours faithfully”; ismini bilsangiz — “Yours sincerely”; do‘stga — “Dear Tom” + “Best wishes”.
- Birinchi gapda xat maqsadini ayting.
- Har bir bandga alohida abzas ajrating.
Namuna javob
Rasmiy ohang to‘g‘ri, muammolar tizimli, takliflar aniq; “as a matter of urgency” kabi rasmiy iboralar. Namuna hajmi: 171 so‘z.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
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I am writing to draw your attention to the poor condition of Navoi Park, which is located near my home in Yunusabad district.
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The park is very popular with local families. Every afternoon, dozens of children play there after school, and many elderly residents go there for a walk in the evenings. It is one of the very few green spaces in our neighbourhood.
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Unfortunately, the park has been neglected for several years. Much of the playground equipment is broken, and some of it is now dangerous for young children. In addition, there are not enough bins, so rubbish is often left on the grass, and several of the street lights do not work, which makes the park unsafe after dark. Several parents have told me that they no longer allow their children to play there alone.
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I would suggest that the council repairs the playground and the lights as a matter of urgency. Installing more bins would also make a significant difference.
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Yours faithfully,
Farhod Yusupov
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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Dear Sir, … Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam, … Yours faithfully,
Ismini bilmasangiz “Yours faithfully” bilan tugatiladi.
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Hi manager! I want my money back!!!
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to request a full refund.
Rasmiy xatda norasmiy ohang va undov belgilari ball tushiradi.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Salom va maqsad
Kimga yozyapsiz (ohangni aniqlang) va nega — birinchi gapdayoq.
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21-band
Birinchi bandni tafsilot bilan yoriting.
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32-band
Ikkinchi band: muammo, sabab yoki tafsilot.
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43-band va yakun
Nima kutayotganingizni ayting va ohangga mos xayrlashing.
Foydali iboralar
Rasmiy xat
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I am writing to complain about / enquire about … … haqida shikoyat qilish / so‘rash uchun yozyapman
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I would be grateful if you could … … qilsangiz minnatdor bo‘lardim
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I look forward to hearing from you. Javobingizni kutaman.
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Yours faithfully, / Yours sincerely, Hurmat bilan (ismsiz / ism bilan murojaatda)
Norasmiy xat
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It was great to hear from you. Xabaringizdan xursand bo‘ldim.
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I’m writing to let you know that … … ekanini aytish uchun yozyapman
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Can’t wait to see you! Ko‘rishishni intiqlik bilan kutaman!
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All the best, / Love, Eng yaxshi tilaklar bilan
Muammo va iltimos
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Unfortunately, … Afsuski …
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To make matters worse, … Eng yomoni …
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I would therefore like to request … Shu sababli … so‘rayman
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
The park near your home is in poor condition.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe the park and how people use it; explain what problems there are; suggest what the council should do.
- describe the park and how people use it
- explain the problems
- suggest what the council should do
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …,
- bog‘ va undan qanday foydalanishni tasvirlang
- muammolarni tushuntiring
- hokimiyat nima qilishi kerakligini taklif qiling
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
IELTS Writing mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
IELTS’da har bir mezonga 0–9 band beriladi, yozma ish bahosi — to‘rt mezonning o‘rtachasi (0,5 ga yaxlitlanadi). Bu yerda B2–C1 uchun eng muhim 5–8 bandlar ko‘rsatilgan.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish Taxminan Band 7.5–8
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention to the poor condition of Navoi Park, which is located near my home in Yunusabad district.
The park is very popular with local families. Every afternoon, dozens of children play there after school, and many elderly residents go there for a walk in the evenings. It is one of the very few green spaces in our neighbourhood.
Unfortunately, the park has been neglected for several years. Much of the playground equipment is broken, and some of it is now dangerous for young children. In addition, there are not enough bins, so rubbish is often left on the grass, and several of the street lights do not work, which makes the park unsafe after dark. Several parents have told me that they no longer allow their children to play there alone.
I would suggest that the council repairs the playground and the lights as a matter of urgency. Installing more bins would also make a significant difference.
Yours faithfully,
Farhod Yusupov