Feedback on a Thesis
Dissertatsiya bo‘yicha fikr-mulohaza
- S Supervisor
- S Student
Tinglashdan oldin: kalit so‘zlar
Har bir so‘zni bosing, eshiting va ovoz chiqarib takrorlang. Bu so‘zlar audioda uchraydi.
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Tayyor bo‘lsangiz, tugmani bosing
Matnga qaramasdan to‘liq tinglang. Kim gapiryapti, qayerda va nima haqida? Har bir so‘zni emas, umumiy ma’noni tushunishga harakat qiling. Kerak bo‘lsa, ikki marta tinglang.
Tushundingizmi?
Javobni tanlang. Ishonchingiz komil bo‘lmasa, pastdagi pleyer orqali qayta tinglang.
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1 What is the main problem with the chapter?
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2 What is the chapter’s central claim?
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3 What does the supervisor advise?
Matn bilan tinglash
Istalgan gapni bosing — o‘sha joydan ijro etiladi. So‘zlar eshitilgan sari yonib boradi.
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Supervisor
I’ve read your third chapter. The research is genuinely impressive, but the argument gets lost in the detail.
Uchinchi bobingizni o‘qidim. Tadqiqot chindan ham ta’sirli, lekin dalil tafsilotlar ichida yo‘qolib ketgan.
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Student
I was worried about that. I wanted to show I’d covered everything.
Shundan xavotirda edim. Hamma narsani qamrab olganimni ko‘rsatmoqchi edim.
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Supervisor
That’s a common instinct, but examiners want to see judgement, not just coverage. What’s the one claim this chapter makes?
Bu keng tarqalgan intilish, lekin imtihonchilar faqat qamrovni emas, mulohazani ko‘rishni xohlaydi. Bu bob ilgari suradigan yagona da’vo nima?
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Student
That the policy failed not because of funding, but because local officials weren’t consulted.
Siyosat moliyalashtirish tufayli emas, balki mahalliy amaldorlar bilan maslahatlashilmagani uchun muvaffaqiyatsiz bo‘lgani.
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Supervisor
Excellent. That sentence should be on the first page. At the moment, it appears on page thirty-two.
A’lo. Bu gap birinchi sahifada bo‘lishi kerak. Hozir u o‘ttiz ikkinchi sahifada.
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Supervisor
Move the interview data that doesn’t directly support it into an appendix, and aim to cut about a third of the length.
Uni bevosita qo‘llab-quvvatlamaydigan intervyu ma’lumotlarini ilovaga o‘tkazing va hajmning taxminan uchdan birini qisqartirishni maqsad qiling.
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Student
A third? That’s painful, but I can see why.
Uchdan birimi? Og‘riqli, lekin nima uchunligini tushunaman.
Diktant
Gapni tinglang va eshitganingizni aynan yozing. Katta-kichik harf va tinish belgilari hisobga olinmaydi. Raqamlarni so‘z bilan yozing.
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