Essay: Online Shopping
Esse: onlayn xarid
In your English class you have been talking about shopping. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Will online shopping replace traditional shops in the future?”
Notes — write about: 1. convenience; 2. the shopping experience; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
B2 First 1-qism essesi: o‘qituvchingiz bergan savolga javob yozasiz. Ikkita qayd beriladi, uchinchisini o‘zingiz qo‘shasiz. Har bir fikr sabab bilan asoslanadi va oxirida aniq xulosa bo‘ladi.
- write about convenience — qulaylik haqida yozing
- write about the shopping experience — xarid tajribasi haqida yozing
- add your own idea — o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Ikkala qaydga ham, o‘z qaydingizga ham alohida abzas ajrating.
- Esse — rasmiy matn: qisqartmalar va “very very” kabi iboralardan qoching.
- 190 so‘zdan oshmang — B2 First’da uzunlik chegarasi bor.
Namuna javob
Uchala qayd yoritilgan, pozitsiya izchil, xulosa asoslangan bashorat bilan. Namuna hajmi: 167 so‘z.
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In the last decade, online shopping has grown enormously, and some people predict that traditional shops will soon disappear. Although I agree that online shopping will continue to grow, I do not think it will completely replace physical shops.
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There is no doubt that online shopping is extremely convenient. Customers can compare prices and buy almost anything at any time without leaving home, which saves both time and money.
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However, many people still enjoy the experience of going shopping. In a real shop, they can try on clothes, touch products and get advice from staff. For many families, shopping is also a social activity that they enjoy at the weekend.
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Moreover, not everyone is comfortable buying things online. Many elderly people prefer to pay in cash and speak to a real person, and in some areas delivery services are still slow or unreliable.
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In conclusion, online shopping will certainly become more important, but I believe traditional shops will survive by offering experiences that the internet cannot provide.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish
Mavzuni tanishtiring va qisqa javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-qayd
Birinchi qayd: fikr + sabab + misol.
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32-qayd
Ikkinchi qayd: boshqa tomon yoki qo‘shimcha fikr.
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4O‘z fikringiz (3-qayd)
Uchinchi, o‘zingizning g‘oyangiz.
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5Xulosa
Pozitsiyani aniq takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
In your English class you have been talking about shopping. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Will online shopping replace traditional shops in the future?”
Notes — write about: 1. convenience; 2. the shopping experience; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
- qulaylik haqida yozing
- xarid tajribasi haqida yozing
- o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish B2 First · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
In the last decade, online shopping has grown enormously, and some people predict that traditional shops will soon disappear. Although I agree that online shopping will continue to grow, I do not think it will completely replace physical shops.
There is no doubt that online shopping is extremely convenient. Customers can compare prices and buy almost anything at any time without leaving home, which saves both time and money.
However, many people still enjoy the experience of going shopping. In a real shop, they can try on clothes, touch products and get advice from staff. For many families, shopping is also a social activity that they enjoy at the weekend.
Moreover, not everyone is comfortable buying things online. Many elderly people prefer to pay in cash and speak to a real person, and in some areas delivery services are still slow or unreliable.
In conclusion, online shopping will certainly become more important, but I believe traditional shops will survive by offering experiences that the internet cannot provide.