Essay: Should Team Sports Be Compulsory?
Esse: jamoaviy sport majburiy bo‘lishi kerakmi?
In your English class you have been talking about sport. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Should all students have to play team sports at school?”
Notes — write about: 1. health; 2. teamwork; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
B2 First 1-qism essesi: o‘qituvchingiz bergan savolga javob yozasiz. Ikkita qayd beriladi, uchinchisini o‘zingiz qo‘shasiz. Har bir fikr sabab bilan asoslanadi va oxirida aniq xulosa bo‘ladi.
- write about health — salomatlik haqida yozing
- write about teamwork — jamoaviy ish haqida yozing
- add your own idea — o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Ikkala qaydga ham, o‘z qaydingizga ham alohida abzas ajrating.
- Esse — rasmiy matn: qisqartmalar va “very very” kabi iboralardan qoching.
- 190 so‘zdan oshmang — B2 First’da uzunlik chegarasi bor.
Namuna javob
Uchala qayd aniq, qarama-qarshi tomon o‘z g‘oyasi sifatida ochilgan, xulosa murosali. Namuna hajmi: 164 so‘z.
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Physical education is part of the school timetable in most countries, but there is disagreement about whether every student should be forced to play team sports. In my opinion, sport should be compulsory, but students should have some choice.
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The main argument for compulsory sport is health. Many young people spend hours sitting in front of screens, and regular exercise at school may be the only physical activity they get. Being active also improves concentration in other lessons.
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In addition, team sports teach valuable social skills. Players learn to cooperate, communicate and accept defeat, which will help them later in their working lives.
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On the other hand, not everyone enjoys team games. Some students feel embarrassed or anxious when they are chosen last, and this can damage their confidence. These students might prefer individual activities such as swimming, running or dance.
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In conclusion, I believe all students should do sport at school, but they should be allowed to choose between team and individual activities.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish
Mavzuni tanishtiring va qisqa javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-qayd
Birinchi qayd: fikr + sabab + misol.
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32-qayd
Ikkinchi qayd: boshqa tomon yoki qo‘shimcha fikr.
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4O‘z fikringiz (3-qayd)
Uchinchi, o‘zingizning g‘oyangiz.
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5Xulosa
Pozitsiyani aniq takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
In your English class you have been talking about sport. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Should all students have to play team sports at school?”
Notes — write about: 1. health; 2. teamwork; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
- salomatlik haqida yozing
- jamoaviy ish haqida yozing
- o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish B2 First · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Physical education is part of the school timetable in most countries, but there is disagreement about whether every student should be forced to play team sports. In my opinion, sport should be compulsory, but students should have some choice.
The main argument for compulsory sport is health. Many young people spend hours sitting in front of screens, and regular exercise at school may be the only physical activity they get. Being active also improves concentration in other lessons.
In addition, team sports teach valuable social skills. Players learn to cooperate, communicate and accept defeat, which will help them later in their working lives.
On the other hand, not everyone enjoys team games. Some students feel embarrassed or anxious when they are chosen last, and this can damage their confidence. These students might prefer individual activities such as swimming, running or dance.
In conclusion, I believe all students should do sport at school, but they should be allowed to choose between team and individual activities.