Essay: Social Media and Teenagers
Esse: ijtimoiy tarmoqlar va o‘smirlar
In your English class you have been talking about technology. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers. Do you agree?”
Notes — write about: 1. communication; 2. mental health; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
B2 First 1-qism essesi: o‘qituvchingiz bergan savolga javob yozasiz. Ikkita qayd beriladi, uchinchisini o‘zingiz qo‘shasiz. Har bir fikr sabab bilan asoslanadi va oxirida aniq xulosa bo‘ladi.
- write about communication — muloqot haqida yozing
- write about mental health — ruhiy salomatlik haqida yozing
- add your own idea — o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Ikkala qaydga ham, o‘z qaydingizga ham alohida abzas ajrating.
- Esse — rasmiy matn: qisqartmalar va “very very” kabi iboralardan qoching.
- 190 so‘zdan oshmang — B2 First’da uzunlik chegarasi bor.
Namuna javob
Ikki tomon ko‘rib chiqilgan, xulosa nozik va asoslangan; “outweigh”, “self-esteem” kabi B2 lug‘ati. Namuna hajmi: 169 so‘z.
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Most teenagers today spend several hours a day on social media, and many parents are worried about its effects. I partly agree that it can be harmful, but I do not think it is all bad.
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On the positive side, social media helps young people keep in touch with friends and family, even when they live far apart. It also allows shy teenagers to connect with others who share their hobbies.
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However, it can have a negative effect on mental health. Teenagers often compare themselves with the perfect images they see online, which can lower their self-esteem and cause anxiety. Cyberbullying is another serious problem.
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Furthermore, social media can take up time that should be spent on studying or sleeping. Many students check their phones late at night, so they feel tired the next day and find it hard to concentrate.
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In conclusion, social media itself is not the problem; the way teenagers use it is. With clear limits and guidance from parents, its benefits can outweigh its dangers.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish
Mavzuni tanishtiring va qisqa javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-qayd
Birinchi qayd: fikr + sabab + misol.
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32-qayd
Ikkinchi qayd: boshqa tomon yoki qo‘shimcha fikr.
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4O‘z fikringiz (3-qayd)
Uchinchi, o‘zingizning g‘oyangiz.
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5Xulosa
Pozitsiyani aniq takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
In your English class you have been talking about technology. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers. Do you agree?”
Notes — write about: 1. communication; 2. mental health; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
- muloqot haqida yozing
- ruhiy salomatlik haqida yozing
- o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish B2 First · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Most teenagers today spend several hours a day on social media, and many parents are worried about its effects. I partly agree that it can be harmful, but I do not think it is all bad.
On the positive side, social media helps young people keep in touch with friends and family, even when they live far apart. It also allows shy teenagers to connect with others who share their hobbies.
However, it can have a negative effect on mental health. Teenagers often compare themselves with the perfect images they see online, which can lower their self-esteem and cause anxiety. Cyberbullying is another serious problem.
Furthermore, social media can take up time that should be spent on studying or sleeping. Many students check their phones late at night, so they feel tired the next day and find it hard to concentrate.
In conclusion, social media itself is not the problem; the way teenagers use it is. With clear limits and guidance from parents, its benefits can outweigh its dangers.