Essay: City or Countryside?
Esse: shahar yoki qishloq?
In your English class you have been talking about where people live. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Is it better for young people to live in a city or in the countryside?”
Notes — write about: 1. opportunities; 2. quality of life; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
B2 First 1-qism essesi: o‘qituvchingiz bergan savolga javob yozasiz. Ikkita qayd beriladi, uchinchisini o‘zingiz qo‘shasiz. Har bir fikr sabab bilan asoslanadi va oxirida aniq xulosa bo‘ladi.
- write about opportunities — imkoniyatlar haqida yozing
- write about quality of life — hayot sifati haqida yozing
- add your own idea — o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Ikkala qaydga ham, o‘z qaydingizga ham alohida abzas ajrating.
- Esse — rasmiy matn: qisqartmalar va “very very” kabi iboralardan qoching.
- 190 so‘zdan oshmang — B2 First’da uzunlik chegarasi bor.
Namuna javob
Uchala qayd yoritilgan, ikki tomon adolatli, xulosa aniq va muvozanatli. Namuna hajmi: 175 so‘z.
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Every year, thousands of young people leave their villages and move to big cities. While city life offers many advantages, I believe the countryside also has a lot to offer.
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There is no doubt that cities provide more opportunities. The best universities and most well-paid jobs are usually found there, and young people can easily meet others who share their interests.
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On the other hand, life in the countryside is often healthier and less stressful. The air is cleaner, there is less noise, and people have more contact with nature. Many young people who move to the city complain about long journeys and crowded flats.
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Another important factor is the cost of living. Rent and food in cities can be extremely expensive, so young people often have to work long hours just to survive. In a village, by contrast, money goes much further.
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In conclusion, I think cities are the better choice for young people who want to study or build a career, but the countryside offers a calmer and more affordable way of life.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish
Mavzuni tanishtiring va qisqa javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-qayd
Birinchi qayd: fikr + sabab + misol.
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32-qayd
Ikkinchi qayd: boshqa tomon yoki qo‘shimcha fikr.
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4O‘z fikringiz (3-qayd)
Uchinchi, o‘zingizning g‘oyangiz.
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5Xulosa
Pozitsiyani aniq takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
In your English class you have been talking about where people live. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Is it better for young people to live in a city or in the countryside?”
Notes — write about: 1. opportunities; 2. quality of life; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
- imkoniyatlar haqida yozing
- hayot sifati haqida yozing
- o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish B2 First · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Every year, thousands of young people leave their villages and move to big cities. While city life offers many advantages, I believe the countryside also has a lot to offer.
There is no doubt that cities provide more opportunities. The best universities and most well-paid jobs are usually found there, and young people can easily meet others who share their interests.
On the other hand, life in the countryside is often healthier and less stressful. The air is cleaner, there is less noise, and people have more contact with nature. Many young people who move to the city complain about long journeys and crowded flats.
Another important factor is the cost of living. Rent and food in cities can be extremely expensive, so young people often have to work long hours just to survive. In a village, by contrast, money goes much further.
In conclusion, I think cities are the better choice for young people who want to study or build a career, but the countryside offers a calmer and more affordable way of life.