IELTS Task 2: Advertising Aimed at Children
IELTS 2-topshiriq: bolalarga qaratilgan reklama
Imtihon qoidalari
- 40 daqiqa — “Boshlash”ni bosganingizda taymer ishga tushadi. Oxirgi 5 daqiqada ogohlantirish chiqadi.
- kamida 250 so‘z — so‘z soni pastda doim ko‘rinib turadi.
- Yordamsiz — namuna, reja va iboralar ko‘rinmaydi. Imlo tekshiruvi ham o‘chirilgan.
- Vaqt tugasa, matn qulflanadi va baholashga o‘tasiz. Ertaroq tugatsangiz — “Topshirish”ni bosing.
Saqlangan qoralama bor — u davom ettiriladi.
Advertising aimed at children should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi. Imtihonda imlo tekshiruvi bo‘lmaydi — u bu yerda ham o‘chirilgan.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
IELTS Writing mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
IELTS’da har bir mezonga 0–9 band beriladi, yozma ish bahosi — to‘rt mezonning o‘rtachasi (0,5 ga yaxlitlanadi). Bu yerda B2–C1 uchun eng muhim 5–8 bandlar ko‘rsatilgan.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish Taxminan Band 8
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Children today are exposed to advertising on television, websites and social media from a very young age. I strongly agree that advertising aimed specifically at children should be banned, as it exploits their lack of judgement.
The main reason is that young children cannot recognise the persuasive purpose of advertisements. Unlike adults, they tend to believe what they see, so clever marketing can easily convince them that they need a particular toy or snack. This creates pressure on parents, who face constant demands and arguments, and it can make children who cannot afford the latest products feel excluded. Advertising also teaches children from a very early age that happiness depends on owning things, which may shape their values for life.
Moreover, much of the advertising aimed at children promotes unhealthy food and drinks. Bright colours, cartoon characters and free toys are used to make sugary products attractive, contributing to rising levels of childhood obesity. Several countries, including Sweden and Norway, have already banned television advertising for young children without any serious negative consequences.
Opponents argue that parents, not governments, should control what their children watch, and that a ban would be difficult to enforce online. While parental responsibility is certainly important, it is unrealistic to expect parents to monitor every screen their children see, so regulation is necessary. Moreover, the success of existing bans shows that enforcement is possible when there is political will.
In conclusion, because children are particularly vulnerable to persuasion and are often targeted with unhealthy products, I believe advertising aimed at them should be prohibited.