IELTS Task 2: Celebrities as Role Models
IELTS 2-topshiriq: mashhurlar namuna sifatida
Celebrities such as film stars, musicians and sports players should set a good example for young people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
IELTS Writing Task 2 — umumiy ballning uchdan ikki qismini beradi. Savol turini aniqlang (fikr, ikki tomon, afzallik-kamchilik, muammo-yechim yoki ikki savolli) va savolning har bir qismiga javob bering. Pozitsiya kirishda ham, xulosada ham bir xil bo‘lsin.
- present arguments for this view — bu fikr foydasiga dalillar keltiring
- present arguments against this view — qarshi dalillarni keltiring
- state clearly how far you agree — qanchalik qo‘shilishingizni ayting
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Vaqtni bo‘ling: 5 daqiqa reja, 30 daqiqa yozish, 5 daqiqa tekshirish.
- Har bir asosiy abzas: markaziy gap → izoh → misol yoki natija.
- Savolning HAR BIR qismiga javob bering — ikki savolli topshiriqda ikkala savolga ham.
- 250 so‘zdan kam bo‘lsa ball kamaytiriladi; 270–320 so‘z eng qulay.
Namuna javob
Pozitsiya aniq (to a large extent), dalillar chuqur, qarshi fikr adolatli va nozik javob bilan. Namuna hajmi: 276 so‘z.
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Famous people have millions of followers on social media, many of whom are teenagers who copy their style, opinions and behaviour. I agree to a large extent that celebrities have a responsibility to set a good example, although parents and teachers remain the most important role models.
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The main reason for my view is the enormous influence celebrities have over young people. When a popular singer speaks openly about mental health or a footballer supports a charity, they can encourage millions of fans to think and act more positively. Conversely, when celebrities promote dangerous diets, glorify violence or behave irresponsibly, young fans may imitate them. Since celebrities benefit financially from their popularity, it seems reasonable to expect them to accept the responsibility that comes with it. Many stars, moreover, deliberately present themselves as role models in order to attract sponsorship.
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On the other hand, celebrities are human beings, and it may be unfair to expect perfection from them. Many became famous for their talent in music or sport, not because they wanted to guide young people. Constant media attention means that every mistake they make is exaggerated, and their private lives are often exposed against their will. Furthermore, focusing on celebrities may distract from the responsibility of parents, teachers and communities, who have a far more direct influence on children.
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While these points are valid, I believe that anyone with a large public platform should behave responsibly in public, even if they cannot be perfect in private.
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In conclusion, celebrities cannot replace parents and teachers, but their influence on young people is so powerful that they should make a conscious effort to set a positive example.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish — 2 gap
Mavzuni qayta ifodalang va savolga to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-asosiy abzas
Markaziy gap → izoh → misol → natija.
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32-asosiy abzas
Ikkinchi fikr yoki savolning ikkinchi qismi — xuddi shu tuzilishda.
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43-abzas (kerak bo‘lsa)
O‘z fikringiz yoki qarshi fikrga javob.
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5Xulosa
Yangi fikr qo‘shmang, pozitsiyani takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
Celebrities such as film stars, musicians and sports players should set a good example for young people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
- bu fikr foydasiga dalillar keltiring
- qarshi dalillarni keltiring
- qanchalik qo‘shilishingizni ayting
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
IELTS Writing mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
IELTS’da har bir mezonga 0–9 band beriladi, yozma ish bahosi — to‘rt mezonning o‘rtachasi (0,5 ga yaxlitlanadi). Bu yerda B2–C1 uchun eng muhim 5–8 bandlar ko‘rsatilgan.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish Taxminan Band 8
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Famous people have millions of followers on social media, many of whom are teenagers who copy their style, opinions and behaviour. I agree to a large extent that celebrities have a responsibility to set a good example, although parents and teachers remain the most important role models.
The main reason for my view is the enormous influence celebrities have over young people. When a popular singer speaks openly about mental health or a footballer supports a charity, they can encourage millions of fans to think and act more positively. Conversely, when celebrities promote dangerous diets, glorify violence or behave irresponsibly, young fans may imitate them. Since celebrities benefit financially from their popularity, it seems reasonable to expect them to accept the responsibility that comes with it. Many stars, moreover, deliberately present themselves as role models in order to attract sponsorship.
On the other hand, celebrities are human beings, and it may be unfair to expect perfection from them. Many became famous for their talent in music or sport, not because they wanted to guide young people. Constant media attention means that every mistake they make is exaggerated, and their private lives are often exposed against their will. Furthermore, focusing on celebrities may distract from the responsibility of parents, teachers and communities, who have a far more direct influence on children.
While these points are valid, I believe that anyone with a large public platform should behave responsibly in public, even if they cannot be perfect in private.
In conclusion, celebrities cannot replace parents and teachers, but their influence on young people is so powerful that they should make a conscious effort to set a positive example.