Proposal: Student Wellbeing
Taklif: talabalar farovonligi
The principal of your college is concerned that many students feel stressed and has asked for proposals on how to improve student wellbeing.
Write a proposal describing the main causes of stress among students, suggesting two or three ways the college could help, and explaining how these measures would benefit students.
Write your proposal in 220–260 words.
C1 Advanced proposal: rahbariyat yoki tashkilotga rasmiy taklif yozasiz. Sarlavhalar bilan bo‘lingan, aniq tavsiyalar va asoslar bilan, rasmiy ohangda.
- describe the causes of stress — stress sabablarini tasvirlang
- suggest ways the college could help — kollej qanday yordam berishini taklif qiling
- explain the benefits — foydasini tushuntiring
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Proposal sarlavhalar bilan bo‘linadi: Introduction, Current situation, Recommendations, Conclusion.
- Majhul nisbat va rasmiy iboralar ishlating: “It is recommended that …”.
- Har bir tavsiyani foyda bilan asoslang.
Namuna javob
Sarlavhalar bilan bo‘lingan, dalilga asoslangan, subjunktiv va majhul nisbat kabi C1 tuzilmalari to‘g‘ri ishlatilgan. Namuna hajmi: 232 so‘z.
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Proposal: Improving Student Wellbeing
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Introduction
The aim of this proposal is to identify the main sources of stress among students at our college and to recommend practical measures to support their wellbeing. -
Current situation
According to a recent survey of 200 students, the main causes of stress are heavy workloads, exam pressure and uncertainty about future careers. Many respondents also reported that deadlines for different subjects often fall in the same week, leaving them exhausted and anxious. A significant number also mentioned that they feel uncomfortable asking teachers for help, as they fear being judged. -
Recommendations
Firstly, it is recommended that a free counselling service be introduced, with trained staff available three days a week. Secondly, departments should coordinate their deadlines so that major assignments are spread more evenly across the term. Finally, the college could organise regular wellbeing workshops on topics such as time management and relaxation techniques. Students could also be given access to a quiet study room that remains open in the evenings during exam periods. -
Expected benefits
These measures would enable students to seek help before problems become serious and would reduce unnecessary pressure during busy periods. In the long term, healthier and more confident students are likely to achieve better results and feel more positive about college life. -
Conclusion
If these recommendations are implemented, I am confident that student wellbeing, and consequently academic performance, will improve significantly.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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I think you should maybe do something about the canteen.
It is recommended that the canteen menu be revised.
Proposal rasmiy va aniq bo‘lishi kerak.
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There is a lot of problems.
There are a number of problems.
Ko‘plikdagi ot bilan “are”.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Maqsad (Introduction)
Taklif nima uchun yozilganini ayting.
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2Hozirgi holat
Muammo yoki ehtiyojni qisqa tasvirlang.
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3Tavsiyalar
2–3 aniq taklif va ularning foydasi.
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4Xulosa
Kutilgan natija va yakuniy tavsiya.
Foydali iboralar
Rasmiy taklif
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The aim of this proposal is to … Ushbu taklifning maqsadi — …
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It is recommended that … … tavsiya etiladi
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One option would be to … Variantlardan biri — …
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This would enable … Bu …ga imkon beradi
Asoslash
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According to a recent survey, … Yaqindagi so‘rovnomaga ko‘ra …
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This would be particularly beneficial for … Bu ayniqsa … uchun foydali bo‘ladi
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If these measures are implemented, … Agar bu choralar amalga oshirilsa …
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
The principal of your college is concerned that many students feel stressed and has asked for proposals on how to improve student wellbeing.
Write a proposal describing the main causes of stress among students, suggesting two or three ways the college could help, and explaining how these measures would benefit students.
Write your proposal in 220–260 words.
- stress sabablarini tasvirlang
- kollej qanday yordam berishini taklif qiling
- foydasini tushuntiring
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish C1 Advanced · 5/5 darajadagi javob
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Namuna
Proposal: Improving Student Wellbeing
Introduction
The aim of this proposal is to identify the main sources of stress among students at our college and to recommend practical measures to support their wellbeing.
Current situation
According to a recent survey of 200 students, the main causes of stress are heavy workloads, exam pressure and uncertainty about future careers. Many respondents also reported that deadlines for different subjects often fall in the same week, leaving them exhausted and anxious. A significant number also mentioned that they feel uncomfortable asking teachers for help, as they fear being judged.
Recommendations
Firstly, it is recommended that a free counselling service be introduced, with trained staff available three days a week. Secondly, departments should coordinate their deadlines so that major assignments are spread more evenly across the term. Finally, the college could organise regular wellbeing workshops on topics such as time management and relaxation techniques. Students could also be given access to a quiet study room that remains open in the evenings during exam periods.
Expected benefits
These measures would enable students to seek help before problems become serious and would reduce unnecessary pressure during busy periods. In the long term, healthier and more confident students are likely to achieve better results and feel more positive about college life.
Conclusion
If these recommendations are implemented, I am confident that student wellbeing, and consequently academic performance, will improve significantly.