Essay: Is Homework Necessary?
Esse: uy vazifasi kerakmi?
In your English class you have been talking about school. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Should schools stop giving homework?”
Notes — write about: 1. free time; 2. learning; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
B2 First 1-qism essesi: o‘qituvchingiz bergan savolga javob yozasiz. Ikkita qayd beriladi, uchinchisini o‘zingiz qo‘shasiz. Har bir fikr sabab bilan asoslanadi va oxirida aniq xulosa bo‘ladi.
- write about free time — bo‘sh vaqt haqida yozing
- write about learning — o‘qish haqida yozing
- add your own idea — o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Ikkala qaydga ham, o‘z qaydingizga ham alohida abzas ajrating.
- Esse — rasmiy matn: qisqartmalar va “very very” kabi iboralardan qoching.
- 190 so‘zdan oshmang — B2 First’da uzunlik chegarasi bor.
Namuna javob
Ikki tomon adolatli, o‘z g‘oyasi asoslangan, xulosa kirish bilan mos. Namuna hajmi: 152 so‘z.
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Homework has always been part of school life, but many students and parents now question whether it is really useful. In my opinion, homework should not be stopped, but it should be reduced.
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Supporters of a ban argue that students need free time to rest, do sport and spend time with their families. After seven hours at school, two or three hours of homework can leave them exhausted and stressed.
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However, homework plays an important role in learning. Practising what we have learned in class helps us remember it, and some skills, such as writing essays, simply cannot be developed in a forty-minute lesson.
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Furthermore, homework teaches students to be independent and responsible. They learn to organise their time and work without a teacher’s help, which is essential for university.
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In conclusion, homework is valuable, but teachers should set shorter, more meaningful tasks so that students still have time for other activities.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish
Mavzuni tanishtiring va qisqa javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-qayd
Birinchi qayd: fikr + sabab + misol.
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32-qayd
Ikkinchi qayd: boshqa tomon yoki qo‘shimcha fikr.
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4O‘z fikringiz (3-qayd)
Uchinchi, o‘zingizning g‘oyangiz.
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5Xulosa
Pozitsiyani aniq takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
In your English class you have been talking about school. Now, your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. “Should schools stop giving homework?”
Notes — write about: 1. free time; 2. learning; 3. (your own idea).
Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. Write 140–190 words.
- bo‘sh vaqt haqida yozing
- o‘qish haqida yozing
- o‘z g‘oyangizni qo‘shing
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
Cambridge / CEFR mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
Cambridge English imtihonlarida (A2 Key, B1 Preliminary) yozma ish 4 mezon bo‘yicha 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Jami 20 balldan 12 va undan yuqorisi — daraja talabiga javob beradi.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish B2 First · 5/5 darajadagi javob
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Homework has always been part of school life, but many students and parents now question whether it is really useful. In my opinion, homework should not be stopped, but it should be reduced.
Supporters of a ban argue that students need free time to rest, do sport and spend time with their families. After seven hours at school, two or three hours of homework can leave them exhausted and stressed.
However, homework plays an important role in learning. Practising what we have learned in class helps us remember it, and some skills, such as writing essays, simply cannot be developed in a forty-minute lesson.
Furthermore, homework teaches students to be independent and responsible. They learn to organise their time and work without a teacher’s help, which is essential for university.
In conclusion, homework is valuable, but teachers should set shorter, more meaningful tasks so that students still have time for other activities.