IELTS Task 2: Online Friendships
IELTS 2-topshiriq: onlayn do‘stlik
Some people believe that friendships formed online are just as valuable as those formed face to face. Others think that online friendships can never be as meaningful.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
IELTS Writing Task 2 — umumiy ballning uchdan ikki qismini beradi. Savol turini aniqlang (fikr, ikki tomon, afzallik-kamchilik, muammo-yechim yoki ikki savolli) va savolning har bir qismiga javob bering. Pozitsiya kirishda ham, xulosada ham bir xil bo‘lsin.
- discuss the view that online friendships are equally valuable — onlayn do‘stlik teng qimmatli degan fikrni muhokama qiling
- discuss the view that they are less meaningful — kamroq ma’noli degan fikrni muhokama qiling
- give your own opinion — o‘z fikringizni bildiring
Imtihon strategiyasi
- Vaqtni bo‘ling: 5 daqiqa reja, 30 daqiqa yozish, 5 daqiqa tekshirish.
- Har bir asosiy abzas: markaziy gap → izoh → misol yoki natija.
- Savolning HAR BIR qismiga javob bering — ikki savolli topshiriqda ikkala savolga ham.
- 250 so‘zdan kam bo‘lsa ball kamaytiriladi; 270–320 so‘z eng qulay.
Namuna javob
Ikkala fikr chuqur va misollar bilan, o‘z pozitsiyasi aniq mezon (trust, honesty) asosida. Namuna hajmi: 280 so‘z.
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Social media, online games and discussion forums have made it possible to form friendships with people we may never meet in person. While some consider these relationships just as genuine as traditional friendships, others believe they lack real depth. In my view, online friendships can be meaningful, but they rarely replace face-to-face relationships completely.
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Those who value online friendships point out that the internet allows people to connect with others who share their interests, regardless of geography. A teenager who feels isolated at school may find understanding and support in an online community of people with similar hobbies or experiences. For people with disabilities, social anxiety or limited mobility, online friendships can be a vital source of connection. Moreover, many lasting relationships, and even marriages, now begin online, which suggests that these friendships can be deep and long-lasting.
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On the other hand, critics argue that online friendships are often superficial. It is easy to present an idealised version of oneself on the internet, so people may never truly know each other. Face-to-face friendships involve shared experiences, physical presence and practical help, such as visiting someone in hospital or helping them move house, which online friends cannot easily provide. There is also a risk of deception, since people are not always who they claim to be.
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I believe the value of a friendship depends on trust, honesty and mutual support rather than on where it began. Online friendships can certainly have these qualities, but they become strongest when friends eventually meet in person.
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In conclusion, online friendships can be valuable and supportive, particularly for isolated people, but face-to-face contact still adds a depth that is difficult to achieve through a screen.
Ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar
O‘zbek tilida so‘zlashuvchilar shu topshiriqda eng ko‘p yo‘l qo‘yadigan xatolar.
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In this essay I will talk about …
While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that …
“I will talk about” — bo‘sh gap. Kirishda darhol pozitsiyangizni ayting.
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Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
Moreover, … As a result, … On the other hand, …
Mexanik ro‘yxat — Coherence uchun Band 6 belgisi. Bog‘lovchini fikr mazmuniga qarab tanlang.
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It’s a big problem and people can’t solve it.
It is a serious problem that people cannot easily solve.
Esseda qisqartmalar ishlatilmaydi; “big” o‘rniga aniqroq so‘z tanlang.
Reja
Har bir qism uchun qisqa qayd yozing — inglizcha kalit so‘zlar yetarli. Tayyor iborani bossangiz, u qaydga qo‘shiladi. Rejangiz yozish paytida yoningizda turadi.
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1Kirish — 2 gap
Mavzuni qayta ifodalang va savolga to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri javob/pozitsiya bering.
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21-asosiy abzas
Markaziy gap → izoh → misol → natija.
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32-asosiy abzas
Ikkinchi fikr yoki savolning ikkinchi qismi — xuddi shu tuzilishda.
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43-abzas (kerak bo‘lsa)
O‘z fikringiz yoki qarshi fikrga javob.
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5Xulosa
Yangi fikr qo‘shmang, pozitsiyani takrorlang.
Foydali iboralar
Kirish va pozitsiya
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It is often argued that … Ko‘pincha … deb ta’kidlanadi
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While there are valid arguments on both sides, I believe that … Ikkala tomonda ham asosli dalillar bor, lekin men … deb hisoblayman
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I completely agree that … Men … degan fikrga to‘liq qo‘shilaman
Fikrni rivojlantirish
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The main reason for this is that … Buning asosiy sababi shuki …
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A clear example of this is … Bunga yorqin misol — …
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This means that … Bu shuni anglatadiki …
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As a result, … Natijada …
Qarama-qarshi fikr va xulosa
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On the other hand, … Boshqa tomondan …
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Admittedly, … ; however, … To‘g‘ri, … ; lekin …
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In conclusion, … Xulosa qilib aytganda …
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outweigh the drawbacks kamchiliklardan ustun turadi
Topshiriqni ko‘rish
Some people believe that friendships formed online are just as valuable as those formed face to face. Others think that online friendships can never be as meaningful.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
- onlayn do‘stlik teng qimmatli degan fikrni muhokama qiling
- kamroq ma’noli degan fikrni muhokama qiling
- o‘z fikringizni bildiring
Matn shu qurilmada avtomatik saqlanadi.
Avtomatik tekshiruv
Sayt matningizning tuzilishini tekshiradi: hajm, bandlar, bog‘lovchilar, takrorlar va yozuv qoidalari. Grammatika va mazmun sifatini esa quyidagi mezonlar bo‘yicha o‘zingiz baholaysiz.
IELTS Writing mezonlari bo‘yicha baholang
IELTS’da har bir mezonga 0–9 band beriladi, yozma ish bahosi — to‘rt mezonning o‘rtachasi (0,5 ga yaxlitlanadi). Bu yerda B2–C1 uchun eng muhim 5–8 bandlar ko‘rsatilgan.
Namuna javob bilan solishtirish Taxminan Band 8
Sizning matningiz
Namuna
Social media, online games and discussion forums have made it possible to form friendships with people we may never meet in person. While some consider these relationships just as genuine as traditional friendships, others believe they lack real depth. In my view, online friendships can be meaningful, but they rarely replace face-to-face relationships completely.
Those who value online friendships point out that the internet allows people to connect with others who share their interests, regardless of geography. A teenager who feels isolated at school may find understanding and support in an online community of people with similar hobbies or experiences. For people with disabilities, social anxiety or limited mobility, online friendships can be a vital source of connection. Moreover, many lasting relationships, and even marriages, now begin online, which suggests that these friendships can be deep and long-lasting.
On the other hand, critics argue that online friendships are often superficial. It is easy to present an idealised version of oneself on the internet, so people may never truly know each other. Face-to-face friendships involve shared experiences, physical presence and practical help, such as visiting someone in hospital or helping them move house, which online friends cannot easily provide. There is also a risk of deception, since people are not always who they claim to be.
I believe the value of a friendship depends on trust, honesty and mutual support rather than on where it began. Online friendships can certainly have these qualities, but they become strongest when friends eventually meet in person.
In conclusion, online friendships can be valuable and supportive, particularly for isolated people, but face-to-face contact still adds a depth that is difficult to achieve through a screen.